Reviews for If She Knew
BitchMcGee chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Man do I love your literature. You're really very good at conveying a tone and a feeling.
BNTN chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Personally I don't like this quite as much as the others, if only because it rings too close to home for far too many people. That aside, though, I really liked you characterisation of the narrator through the first line.
MyWeirdWorld chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
I think this is over-used, but still original. You didn't use the stereotypical popular girl, or the age (which is most of the time 16 or 17).

The writing is good. Love the volvo thing XD volvo's suck

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