Reviews for Situation
blackrosestears chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
I love the line "Do you think I'll wait for you then?". Wonderful job.
Orion Demasecus chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
I really like the context but a few technical things seem weird. First off, sometimes you rhyme and sometimes you don't. There doesn't seem to be a pattern to your rhymes, more like you just put them in where you could. Secondly, repeating that second paragraph over and over like chorus seemed redundant and out of place. I think it would have been better to use it just one, probably at the end.

Other than that, I really liked the wording you chose and the topic was very interest and explored very well.