Reviews for Broken
Fay Laverne chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
I really like this. It could definitely be a song. You seem like a very interesting person, from your profile. Thanks for commenting on my poem! My best friend says it's her favorite.
Eden Green chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
You've done a really good job painting the picture in this poem. It's almost like a page in a diary of someone who changed their mind, in their relationship. Well done!