|Reviews for I See The Smoke But All I Hear Is Cheering|
| Snowlilly31497 chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
I loved your uses of repetition. "...like a fire, burn on."
"I See The Smoke But All I Hear Is Cheering" is a great poem!
| key1877 chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
I really like this. Your wording is very creative and unique.