Reviews for A Lovely Murder
Jessiytots chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
I love this!

I think I noticed a few grammatical errors but otherwise you have an amazing one shot here!

Original, well written and thought provoking- well done. C:
Speak Blue chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Awesome dude :) This is Cassie, BTW
BNTN chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Most of the story is good. The twist is also decent, but to me (who, admittedly, reads a lot of crime fiction) the ending twist is a bit predictable. Though to be fair there are really only a few possible outcomes for a story like this.

I'd space it out a bit, possibly have it from his point of view where it turns out he's writing a letter or something. As I said, the story itself is good, but the twist lacks the impact it'd be possible to get if it'd been written slightly differently.
MyWeirdWorld chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
i like how he handled it so lightly. So easy. And still, theres this double layer, kinda. Because it is not lightly to kill someone you love.

I dunno what to say XD my head hurts.