|Reviews for The Time shall come...|
| Lady B.V Rose chapter 1 . 9/5/2003
XP Nyah...me thinks people should know this...but they don't...*Claps*
| Le Ferre chapter 1 . 11/8/2002
wow...interesting way of expressing that..I would have never used haiku form
| The Haiku Police chapter 1 . 2/18/2002
The HKP salute.
| Pegasus3 chapter 1 . 6/12/2001
Very good, kind of like a poem I was working on before, though not Haiku.
| Amanda Psyc chapter 1 . 6/1/2001
Whoa, that's deep. I see what you mean about not reading it in a hole.
| Anayako Katana chapter 1 . 5/28/2001
I absolutely love this poem, it's great! It does a awesome job to convey the purpose without confusing the reader. Unfortunatly, I believe that, like a chain, a poem is only as strong as it's weakest word. "Soon-ish" needs some work. Other than that it was excellent
| lena chapter 1 . 5/27/2001
Ha, ur wrong. I am in a hole, maybe it didnt get me out, but it did help. u are right, no one lives forver. These are really good. keep wrtting.