I like how you didn't give your lovers names it gives the readers room for imaginenation I decided the girls name was mirya and the guys Peter sorry for my spelling and grammar

This story was so cute 3 Loved it (:

I almost expected her boyfriend to accuse her of cheating or something. It didn't seem believable that he took it do calmly.

I'm really enjoying this so far. I hope you explain how she got pregnant though.

I LOVE IT. I can't stop smiling when I'm reading this! "Awwwh"... He's the sweetest bf in the world!

this is a really good end point to the story but please write a sequel or publish some more chapters it is really good and i don't want it to end yet! it is an amazing story and has such good ideas and research behind it! well done!

This story is really good, i really enjoy the way you let the reader imagine the character for themselves i think it really effective in this kind of working! well done and i really want to know what happens next! :)

cant wait for her to have the baby. is it girl or boy?

argh! BABIES COMING YAY XD cant wait for tha nxt chapter XD

Wow ur doing a great job

Now I feel kinda stupid about what I said before. GREAT CHAPTER! I can't wait to see the baby, it'll be AWESOME! You did well. There was one mistake that I saw:

"Are kids are going to kill us, you know that right?"

It should be "OUR kids are going to kill us, you know that right?"

Other than that it was a PERFECT chapter! Can't wait to read what's NEXT!

Loyal reader,

Sparrowdaughter

hurry nd update

OKAY! WAIT A MINUTE! Who was the blonde?was it the Father in Law or...? btw Update again soon :D

I'm kinda confused about who's point of view it was in and who the 'he's' were. Anyhow I think it was well written and writing it over until you like it was good. I can't wait for the rest of it the baby shower is done! SO EXCITING.

Loyal reader,

Sparrowdaughter

Italy! not cool -_- thanx for the update :D