The last lines made this.

stunning, really. love this. all the emotion, feelings, absolutely fabulous. plus, gorgeous wording and imagery. unf.

sorry for the poor quality of this review, really, this piece deserves so much more than i can give.

keep up the good work.

good. descriptive for some reason it made me smile, but then again I'm a weird one.

This is wonderful! I love it! I just wish it was longer! Please, write more like this.

"sink your teeth into my neck until i bleed?" I can't count how many times I've begged for this to happen. This was epic!

damn. this is crazy. intense, desperate, harsh. brutal. (i can't think of enough words for it.) i absolutely adore it.

This is a very evocative poem, and I love how you say "and i don't mean that in a purely sexual way", because there's something more to it than that, isn't there? And the last stanza is great, as well.