|Reviews for Put A Penny In The Meter|
| AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
great poem again :-) Loved it especially the line, 'we like sun here too you know'
Very funny poem, great job!
| R. Ficst chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
ohh myyy! hahaha!
I started out really confused, thinking there was some weird British system with meters at laundromats and I just didn't understand. But this poem is absolutely brilliant! And hilarious!
I love the voice and persona of the poem. The pacing and repetition, and all the great figurative language work together to make this poem superb. Very clever, and very cute. Love your concept and successful execution : )
| BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
A penny is nothing
In CA a quarter is only 10 minutes meters are expensive there
In my case a quarter would be 2 hours...except in the city
But very aggressive poem
I can see why you complain-at least you don't live in CA things are more expensive there and you'd be paying way more than a penny a day.