Reviews for Evangeline
Red chapter 19 . 11/2/2013
While this was incredible written, some parts weren't realistic. Those who listened to Leslie and what she had to say wild realistically look into Angie for signs of sociopathy and psychopathy. DNA proof could've been gotten from the things she gathered. While these small holes bothered me, I still enjoyed the story.
Jazziet chapter 19 . 1/26/2012
Wow. That was absolutely amazing even if the ending was sad and bitter. I swear reading this I just wanted to reach into the pages and punch Evangeline in the throat repeatedly. Great story.
xXPoEtRyMoUtHXx chapter 19 . 1/19/2012
Oh. My. God.

AWESOME!

DISTURBING!

HOLY CRAP this was good. I read the whole thing in only two sittings. You should write a sequel.

-XXPMXX
MoroseEcstasy chapter 19 . 1/16/2012
Very creepy and well written. Enjoyed it very much :D
theadventuresofkyasi chapter 19 . 12/18/2011
I loved this story very much. Just, I think Leslie should have just taken her daughter away from Evangeline, she should have left. I understand there were reasons, but oh. I still read every word of this story, and loved it. :)
TheShiftingMonkey chapter 19 . 11/24/2011
Oh snap! This has got to be one of the most disturbing stories I've ever read. Excellent work!
Lupo669 chapter 8 . 11/8/2011
It's amazing that Audri isn't cracking up from the strain...
Lupo669 chapter 7 . 11/4/2011
Angie seems smarter than her mom at this point. Les should have called the child anyway and asked, lol...
Lupo669 chapter 6 . 11/4/2011
Leslie is sounding a little paranoid, lol. I wonder if she has a history of being dramatic?
Lupo669 chapter 5 . 11/4/2011
The suspicions keep mounting, lol...
Lupo669 chapter 4 . 11/4/2011
Is Lacy skittish around everyone or just a certain someone, lol...
Lupo669 chapter 3 . 11/3/2011
It's always in the little clues, the things noticed and quickly forgotten or misinterpreted...isn't it? Lol...

Nice chapter!
Lupo669 chapter 2 . 11/3/2011
"it was all my imagination." Dum, Dum,da...lol.

I wonder what exactly was being whispered? And even though Evangeline was smiling, was Audrey?

Thanks for writing...
Lupo669 chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Okay... The moms self doubt and guilt from suspicions comes across very well. She acknowledges all the alternate explanations for whatever is bugging her. Very nice start...
2plus2equals5 chapter 19 . 10/25/2011
I was not expecting that...

Awesome story!
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