Reviews for Sunset
Gabriel Stone chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Poetry doesn't have to rhyme, and that's something you capture perfectly in this poem. I know a lot of people who would love to have the simple yet somehow intricate writing style you have. I'll be keeping tabs on your stories, though I wish I had time to read them now. I'm glad I found your profile.

Gabriel
Fadded chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
Awww so sweet. I am usually not a fan of poetry with long lines I guess but it was cute! I love the last lines: "Sometimes he whispers 'I love you, I adore you' down the phone before I sleep but most of the time we sleep together, his arms around my chest, his lips to my ear." It was touching. Also to answer your review response, I am glad I could help you out a little and I understand completely about the whole favorite and alert thing. I feel great, but not really sure if they are still reading after or how they felt. I also don't the ones that say 'It's great! write more' and that is it. Great. Thanks, but what else? lol.