Reviews for Our Secret Weakness
ImmanenceEnsured chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
I don't exactly know how, but this was incredible, in some way. The words felt amazing, the stream of the words, even if at times it was a bit awkward, I enjoyed that awkwardness.

I wish he'd hold my hAnd, ...
"I wish I'd nicked something Else." ...
I wish he knew how I fElt, ...

These lines sounded RIGHT. Perfect.
someplacenice chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Wow, just wow. This is so good, the varying lengths of each line makes the flow smooth and really nice to read. It's really beautiful; I love how you mix thoughts with what really happening. This is amazing, well done :D x
GreenGrass1 chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
I always admired people who can write poems because I can't. I enjoy this poem. Loose and flowing and just brimming with emotion. Your story-telling through a poem reminds me of Robert Frost - my all time favourite.
Gabriel Stone chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Picturesque. There is no other word able to describe this poem. Just... I can't even place it into words.