|Reviews for Confess|
| Eden Green chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Very sweet. 'I've never done something like this
I'm new to this feeling of wanting a kiss', I particularly like those lines. Might I suggest a little changing of words? 'My emotions are losing control
Of who I am so I'll take a stroll', changed to 'I'm losing control of my emotions, And of who I'm so I'll a stroll'. It's easier to read that way, but well done!