Reviews for What a Beautiful Lie
CherryBlossomFlower chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
Hi! Cherryblossomflower here,

That was amazing, the emotion in it was really powerful, your a very good poet.

Keep Writing!


HalfPast12 chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
This poem is very well written. I especially loved the line, "Everybody else knows the answers, yet they won't dare tell" because many people believe that they are the only one who don't know the answers. But in truth, some questions remain questions.

CityGirl419 chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
Loved this one too!

I liked the repetitiveness of the Beautiful lies. It gives it a nice rhythm and it made it sound so beautiful.