Reviews for Sequel: Heart Plunder
Fading-Scream chapter 2 . 8/14/2013
So far, an interesting read. Will finish it tomorrow (its midnight here) and give you a more constructive review. :)
Addy96 chapter 65 . 7/12/2013
I really love these books and I. Definetly think. You should try to publish them. Its. Really complex. And full. Of twists. So it keeps. Mr. Thinking and interested. The. Only. Problem. I see is. Typos. Cant wait. For. The next. One. Sorry. Tot. Weird. Typing I hats writing on my kindle!
xDangerousLovex chapter 65 . 3/12/2013
I absolutely love this trilogy! It keeps me going, I never want do stop reading until I'm finished. I'm super excited to find out what the third book is going to offer us. I read a lot of stories on FP and you are becoming one of my favorite authors! I'm glad that I have discovered your stories. I can't wait for you to start book 3 , I will actually be able to follow it the whole time. Do you happen to know when you might start it?

- Danielle
xDangerousLovex chapter 18 . 3/11/2013
Do you know that chapter 15 and 18 are the same chapter?

- Danielle
Kazu'sTsundere21 chapter 15 . 4/24/2012
T~T noo i liked Quodicius XD
Vivace.Assai chapter 65 . 2/12/2012
Oh wow...

That was one EPIC (capitalized for emphasis) ending!

I absolutely cannot believe what happened. The discoveries that Shahor made and the discussion between Hinnamo and the Eolderess revealing that Ravoe is actually the... It was unbelievable. I really cannot process the information, though now I have questions forming in my mind that I will not ask since they will probably be answered.

As this story is complete, I wanted to say that this story has been an absolutely wonderful read. I loved every single chapter, and the plot progression was done brilliantly. I perfectly enjoyed your every word and your every twist, and whoa, were the twists amazing. The writing continued to be brilliant like that metaphor about the cracks on the earth being similar to wounds on virgin flash, and in fact, it approved a lot which is good. I'm really happy that I was able to find and read this series because it is absolutely wonderful.

Thanks for the great read!

And now, onto the third story!

Signing off...
Vivace.Assai chapter 57 . 2/11/2012
... Okay... My brain is still trying to process the information revealed in this chapter. Please give it a minute...


Wait, what? So, Amlab might be a dermatio (Ravoe's dermatio)? And Amlab has lied to Shahor all this time? And Ramshonn is actually good? And everything that Shahor has known might be a lie? You know... despite the fact that I kind of hypothesized some of these theories, I'm still nevertheless completely shocked... and confused... Wait... Does this mean that there once was a true Amlab but he got replaced by a dermatio (since Quod keeps talking about how Amlab was different before but then changed a few years back)? Or should I just stop asking these questions since all will be revealed?

Anyways, great past few chapters. They've kept me on the edge of my seat (especially since your chapter endings were all cliffhangers). I loved how you continued to develop the characters and the relationships between the characters, while also hinting at many other things to be revealed in the future. These past few chapters have been a great read.

Thanks for sharing this epic tale with us!

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Vivace.Assai chapter 51 . 2/11/2012
Great past few chapters.

I've enjoyed the different adventures into the different kingdoms of Hell. You've really painted a whole new world in these past few chapters, and it was pretty amazing. As the hints that you keep adding, these chapters have really made me suspicious about everything and everyone, except for Quod, Shahor, Adambru, and Cyano... And even Quod I'm not entirely certain about (though, just like Shahor, I really do want him to be an ally). I'm glad that Adambru can live longer though, since he's such a great character!

Thanks for the great read! I can't wait to continue on!

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Vivace.Assai chapter 46 . 2/5/2012
These past few chapters have been very interesting. The journey has really continued to given me a better perception of Hell, and as for the foreshadowing that you keep adding... why do I have a feeling that Amlab really isn't who he says he is? I have so many theories in my mind right now, especially with the new information that you've given us, and I can't help but feel that Amlab is slightly treacherous. I guess, I'll know at the end of this though...

Also, the songs in the last chapter were so melancholic and emotional. The lyrics created were beautiful.

Thanks for the great read!

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Vivace.Assai chapter 42 . 2/4/2012
Oh wow... these last few chapters have once again taken me by surprise. The revelation in this chapter was certainly mind-bending. Does this mean Avaritia was the main culprit the whole time? And she just made Abdonia to do her dirty work? And what about this secret of Amlab's? Questions are just overfilling my mind. I'm really curious of what secrets Hell has been hiding the whole. The Realm of Hell is really complex, and I continue to be astounded with all the mysteries in it.

Also, Adambru and Cyano are really adorable. They've just entered my list of favorite characters in this story (it's kind of strange that the minor characters are more endearing to me than many of the more major characters).

Thanks for the great read!

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Vivace.Assai chapter 35 . 2/3/2012
Oh... the plot is really getting interesting. I thought the skulls were an interesting addition to the last few chapters, but this tapestry just about matches the skulls in excitement and intrigue. Heart Plunder has really expanded the hidden secrets of Hell and beyond, and it just adds so much more depth to the story.

As for the plot itself, I feel so worried for Amlab, Shahor, and Hell itself... Hopefully, this expedition with Quod will go well, but seeing how this plot is going, I have a feeling this won't be case.

Anyways, thanks again for the great read!

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Vivace.Assai chapter 30 . 2/3/2012
These last chapters have been a whirlwind of surprise and shocking revelations. The introduction of the skulls were definitely unexpected, and their impact even more surprising. However, the plot has certainly become more dynamic and exciting.

I've completely enjoyed reading these past few chapters. Thanks for the great read!

I really am excited to see what happens next.

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Vivace.Assai chapter 25 . 1/29/2012
These past few chapters have been a great read. The plot is progressing in ways that I never expected. As a comment about the past few chapters, I've liked how you've continued to develop Shahor's and Amlab's relationship.

It seems that as Shahor's views of things change, my own perception of the characters and world change, and that's what I really like about this story. When Shahor first came to Hell in Demon Soul, I was totally disgusted by the place, and though sometimes you manage to throw something in absolute horrendous, I feel more at home reading about this place, just like Shahor. The narration you've done is brilliant - it binds the readers to Shahor's own experiences and feelings.

Thanks for the great read!

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Vivace.Assai chapter 19 . 1/29/2012
Beautiful chapter with a wonderful resolution about the mind and strength as a whole. I really enjoyed reading all the imagery you created along of the inner subconscious, and though I'm perfectly confused why Shahor would stab and kill her parents, this revelation is very interesting. I'm glad that instead of despairing about it, though, she's able to realize she is sinful but she can do better things to make up for it.

But, just out of curiosity, I noticed that Chapter 18 was a lot like Chapter 15. I mean, it seemed like an exact copy, so I was slightly confused.

Beyond that, these past few chapters have been a joy to read. I really like how you make so many comments about human nature in this story. This is one of those reads that are exciting to read but also makes you think... a lot.

Thanks for the great read!

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Vivace.Assai chapter 13 . 1/29/2012
Okay... First off, these last few chapters were great and really interesting. Avaritia is possibly the traitor? To be frank, I kind of suspected that myself, but she was so kind that I didn't want to believe that... Oh well, we'll just have to see more about this.

However, I'm confused about one thing. This chapter mentions how Quod went to jail for her parents' murder instead of Shahor. This is where I'm slightly confused. Did Shahor cause the fire? And when did you tell us this? Was I just zooming through the story so quickly that I missed this important piece of news? Or am I just reading what was in this chapter wrong?

Thanks for the great read!

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