Reviews for Love
LivesTooShort52 chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
*Loose A loose shoe lace

*Lose Lose a card game

A nice poem. Good for a first time. My poems (what I write of them - I'm mostly a writer, not a poet).

Please check out and review some of my poems/one-shots/books, not because I commented on your story, but because sometimes everybody needs a little bit of advice and encouragement.