Reviews for Dawn to Dusk
out-of-the-way chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
This is really well written. And I can feel the emotion residing in you when you wrote it!

Great work!

I loved the opening line-

'I stare out my window, watching as the tendrils of scarlet streak across a brand new sky'

This imagery has a very creative touch to it! (:

Great work!

out-of-the-way
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
The imagery is splendid I'm not a night owl but it makes Ne want the night

The picture this paints is fantastic like I can deal everyword you write

I love it!
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
This is really good and I can relate to this, I'm not a morning person - I prefer the night! The imagery in this is superb that I couldn't help imagining the stars forming Picasso's face smiling over his 'work'. This is beautiful!