I really enjoyed reading this story even though in the beginning I hated how she acted with him. You have a LOT of spelling mistakes and some incomplete sentences. Have a good day :)
Sarah

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I really liked your story, though there were a lot of spelling mistakes and I think that the characters would sometimes be out of character :/ But I still enjoyed it :) Thanks!

Had to do a double take to see if she really was the one who said it hahaha :D

Oooh... This is sad *sniff*

Loved this story so much, i read it in a day!

O my goddess, that was so good

Beautiful!

Amazing, wonderful, fantastic story! This work of art totally deserves wayyyyy more reviews and favorites! Thanks for writing such an amazing story! (:

Wow, that was an awesome story. There were some grammar and syntax issues throughout but not enough to detract from the story. It was absolutely one of the best I have had the pleasure of reading. Just a friendly suggestion, you may want to get the help of a beta reader, the grammar mistakes would be hard to catch on your own and fresh eyes can catch them more easily.

Again, fantastic job. That was amazing!

Wow. I'd never be that forgiving. If my dad said something like that to me, I'd flat out tell him that I'm moving out (which I can legally do now), and I'd never speak to him again.

I knew it the second he licked her :P

"I plan on seeing you in that one day" in what?

So Cute! Love it!

I've only made it this far, and I think your story is great. You could use a bit of work on your grammar though. A few small things, a couple of typos, simple stuff.

I really like this story! I can't wait for the next chapter!