|Reviews for Anton with nude Asian girl|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
"come-hither stares inside the Formica/Technicolor glow of cell phone to"... Why capitalize the T?
I really loved that third stanza. You described the whole light thing beautifully.
The descriptions of you and him in the fourth and fifth stanza are really great as well.
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