Reviews for It's Only Make Believe
Shailaputri chapter 1 . 8/31/2019
The starting scenes are very interesting, where the plane crash lands and all..but later on it took a boring turn and the end is kind of rushed.
zagato chapter 14 . 1/20/2019
This is a sweet and lovely story, thank you!
Nyx Nightglade chapter 9 . 9/23/2014
She is such a brat... I can't stand this person anymore.
Nyx Nightglade chapter 8 . 9/23/2014
Nyx Nightglade chapter 7 . 9/23/2014
Stupid, stupid Misty...
Nyx Nightglade chapter 2 . 9/23/2014
Leasah chapter 14 . 12/26/2013
I really enjoyed this. I know that whenever I want to read something contemporary and I don't find anything new, I can always rely on you for a good, heartwarming story. I'm just dreading the day when I will have read all of your complete stories. For now, I still have two more! :)
Thank you for bringing us this.
Leasah chapter 3 . 12/24/2013
I started reading this! I like the flow and speed of the story. I like the characters too.
Efra chapter 14 . 4/6/2012
Loved it
Hunter-nin-ilki chapter 14 . 4/1/2012
In love with this story, 333 so much
Hady chapter 14 . 3/8/2012
This story is terribly under-appreciated! It was amazing. I admit it went slow in the beginning and I really thought that Misty is just a brat. But I read the last seven chapters holding my breath in anticipation. Also, the ending came like a blast to me. I didn't expect Bobbi would arrange such a farce for one commercial. Had I been in Misty's or Bobby's shoes, I'd probably just make a huge scene and get out of it.

Oh, I forgot, I strongly dislike Misty's family. They seem to be a bunch of judgemental, narrow-minded people who honestly believe that if you have no college degree you are a lower being. Especially the sister who says 'I don't want cheap cosmetics'. This woman totally misses on the point of Christmas and the concept of family is too far away from her. Sorry for my heated argument against your characters, I hope I hadn't offended you.
Alanisaur chapter 14 . 2/8/2012
Great Story. But it ended so suddenly. I didnt even know it was gonna end there. Until you said the end of course. I thought it was going to have more scenes after their 'fake marriage' && have the characters go through more turmoil with their love relationship ? Well, I think you should serioudly consider a rewrite on thise last chapter. Maybe even just take it out ? & write more. Because this definitely did not feel like an ending to me.
R. Ficst chapter 14 . 2/7/2012
my goodness, what a crazy story! _ I found it very enjoyable, and the characters were pretty cute 3

nice work : )
A Shattered Sky chapter 13 . 1/22/2012
Wow. He is a jackass. I feel bad for Misty. :/
Alanisaur chapter 13 . 1/22/2012
My gosh. It sounds like he raped her. O_o
20 | Page 1 2 Next »