|Reviews for The Forlorn Ghost|
| AshWolf Forever chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
A fairly interesting story. Good work.
| Station Management chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
This is a pretty cool story to have written for a school thing. I know when I write things for school they always suck in comparison to other things I write, but this is a really good story.
You mentioned at the end that you tend to write about ghosts and death a lot, but there's nothing wrong with that. Ghosts can be fun to write about, and I know I always like reading a story with a ghost in it.
Admittedly, your school could have done a better job reading over that first part before putting it out there, but that's not your fault :P