Reviews for The Masquerade Ball
Animesweettart79 chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Well, well. good job. i can't believe that i've never read that before. Loved it. Did i catch myself as one of the friends? well, since you've been demanding more from my story, i'll have to probe you for more of yours!
Animesweettart79 chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Well, well, well. Good job. i totally liked it. did i catch myself as one of the friends? Well, since you have been demanding me of more content for my story, i guess i'll have to do the same. MORE PLEASE!
Beautility chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
The basic storyline here works well, and I'm intrigued by the cliffhanger. I'd live to see more soon.

Sadly, I'm not quite as enamoured with the overall structure. Most of the characters only get a real introduction in the last half, and the opening paragraph made me cringe a bit. A little bit of a rewrite would make it much more interesting to follow to the bottom. Which people definitely should, as it improves a hundredfold by the end.

-Beau
karama chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
I really like it. It seems like a cute lil story

Keep writing it.

Please read and review my stories as well. Thanks.