Hello I just finished all four of the mother of learning audio books from audible. It was so good I loved the scope of everything. All the crazy adventures like stealing the air ship breaking into the royal treasury it was all so insanely fun but also felt natural as we were able to see all the development Zorian went through to get to this point. I really like how this experience actually helped Zorian develop as a more social person. A lot of stories have the main character turn into an edge lord from situations like this. I loved everything about this story and I would love to see more from this world if you write ever continue. I really enjoyed your writing and I will now see your other works. Thank you so much.

Thank you so much for this story, it was something I'd begun reading years ago, and stumbled back across it now, an entirely different person. It was in a way an even better experience for it. To see the way Zorian changed so gradually from his own perspective, to the instant and jarring way it must have felt for all those close to him, there was a lot that felt relatable in so many ways with that strange personal loss of time and the different realities so many of us have for one another. I really appreciated how much this was able to affect me, and I can't wait to read more of your work!

Just amazing

nice

I kept trying to remember where I heard of morlocks. Finally did this chapter...
H.G Wells "The Time Traveler" been about 25 years since I read it.
It's a good reference I suppose. The Queen of the Morlocks was the antagonist.

This is such a great story that I like to keep coming back to it every now and then! It's one of the few stories that I like to re-read.

As for other post story chapters, I'd love to read about Novelty's first day at the Academy, especially what with her being it's first non-human student and all. Would she need to have first learned reading and writing though? That could be tricky.

Also, I've got an idea for a chapter or two about a plausible chain of investigation, reasoning, and analysis for the Eldemarian investigator that's looking into the Cyoria invasion to deduce Zorian's involvement based on known details (or at least strongly suspect him), part of how he did what he did, and if so, why to never actually question him directly about it. Some of his thinking would be wrong, of course, but it would still be a good effort at explaining some of what happened.

Can I DM you more details on that?

Long enough story for a good amount of content, and this work of sci-fi I will never forget. The story was intriguing and interesting, the mechanics of the magic and how the characters learned them were very entertaining. I typically hate the “school arcs” of anime and manga, but the story was truest great, and I couldn’t stop thinking about what was going to happen next and loved predicting what was going to happen and being completely wrong in the best way possible.

Various characters use object pronoun with conjunction where subject pronoun should be used, as in "me and Joe did this", which should be "Joe and I did this".

Hasn't conventional lighter-than-air flight occurred to anyone in this universe?

I don't see why Zorian continues to object morally to certain acts. None of it matters: everyone and everything he might harm is erased at the end of the month anyway! Kant was an idiot

Saw that one coming

This is the best story I’ve read on here and a competitor for many of my favorite books of all time. You’ve done your audience proud, nobody103. I hope you know that.
Thank you for this adventure.

I need Zorian and Ako to fall in love. I surely hope this will be a thing.

Even the loop covering the planet isn't enough. If the planet orbits a star, astronomers at the beginning of each loop would notice that the star's sunspot pattern, for example, instantly changes. If there are other planets in the system, they would suddenly be in the wrong places in the sky.

It being limited to the local solar system would probably be enough; a few years of stellar drift (under our physics) isn't sufficient to be observable with early-20th-century telescope technology. Assuming that there haven't been any supernovae or anything similar since the loop started, it could continue for a very long time before anything became visibly wrong with interstellar space.

I love your breakpoints and the book cover.