Reviews for Mother of Learning
Lurker chapter 108 . 2/11/2020
Thank you for your long work.

I'm deeply grateful and jealous of your commitment to this story for such a long time. You've made a great story, I hope you have the intellectual property thingy well under control as this work deserve to be published (and I would buy it with clear satisfaction).

I'm French, and these books would sell if translated as well. Maybe a japanese translation and an anime series are possible.

I'll be looking for news about Altazia and I wish you the best of luck for the rest.
Steallet chapter 1 . 2/11/2020
Great !
Fraser chapter 108 . 2/11/2020
Got tears in my eyes with a dopey smile on my face

It was so good, and it ended so well. You tie up plenty of the loose ends, or show how they are getting tied up such as with the books from Zorian, showing the logical aftermath without trying to artificially give everyone a happy ever after.

They are rebuilding, its messy, the loops over. There are consequences. Zach is still annoyed at Zorian. The End. And that messy Ending is perfect 3
A Man chapter 108 . 2/11/2020
Simply Very Good.
Guest chapter 108 . 2/11/2020
Thank you very much for writing and even more for finishing.
Guest chapter 108 . 2/11/2020
Hi there, i'm French and i discovered your fiction years ago, just want to say something :
Dariahn chapter 108 . 2/11/2020
I've been following your story for some time and was concerned if it would be finished at some point, because lots of them get abandoned.
CONGRATULATIONS on getting it done!
I loved the concept and your way of writing.
If at some point you decide to publish it, I'd be glad to get a copy.
Kickstarter maybe?
I'd also like to follow you more and read whatever you might write.
You're amazing and it's your day today!
Zauber chapter 108 . 2/11/2020
I started reading Mother of Learning in 2014, and it has been one of my favorite stories. I've reread this book several times before it was even finished, and I'm honestly a little sad that it finally ended. Thank you for all the hard work, and I look forward to reading more content.
svenni702 chapter 108 . 2/11/2020
Enjoyable journey
Anna chapter 108 . 2/10/2020
Thank you for writing, good luck with your future projects, whatever they may be
JuliusGhard chapter 108 . 2/10/2020
Thank you, thank you so much, this is going to be in my top books of all time (pun intended).
When you publish the book please put the info here as I will buy it.
You made a great story and world, thank you again for sharing it.
Mizuki Stone chapter 108 . 2/10/2020
This was an amazing experience. Thank you for giving it to all of us.
BobVosh chapter 108 . 2/10/2020
It was incredibly ambitious, you were pretty self deprecating in this which I can get. Internet is a cruel mistress.

Your characters were imaginative, fun, and well fleshed out even if they didn't vary in vocal mannerisms enough as you said.

Had some amazing twists in there. Honestly the thing you did better than almost any of the other groundhogs day style loops is you knew where you were going with it, and *you knew where you were going to end it*. Most just flicker out without a real ending.

Honestly I love the story, and plan on rereading it in a few weeks/months/maybe when I'm done with a full time job and full time school. Time is at a premium right now. Definitely want to read this if you do get it published, and look forward to whatever else you do. I hope you relax a bit, and enjoy your next work.
Guest chapter 108 . 2/10/2020
God I will miss this story. It became a piece of me and it was one of the best stories I ever read. I really hope you continue writing more in the future, because you help give me life.

Sorry, I'm almost in tears. Thanks so much for this story. God Bless
ngocnv371 chapter 107 . 2/10/2020
And of course the overpowered Grey Hunter gets even more powerful. And under compulsion.
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