Reviews for Mother of Learning
Guest chapter 102 . 9/8/2019
Za~! Zan update! Waz worrized, keptz hearingz ze main characterz mezzing up my statez all lazt weekz.
ggking75 chapter 102 . 9/8/2019
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lokeshchandak2 chapter 102 . 9/8/2019
I am speechless. This was great. Really want to read the final chapter RightNow.
Guest chapter 102 . 9/8/2019
Oh yeah, it's all coming together.
It's fun to see that even in this climactic battle, Zorian and RR are still just playing their grand scale game of chess.
Guest chapter 101 . 9/8/2019
Hey, man, I hope you are ok there! I mean alive and well, seeing as it is Sep 9 already.
AgentFire chapter 1 . 9/7/2019
I might as well note that fictionpress may only be still alive thanks to the mother of learning
loveGoodNovels chapter 101 . 9/7/2019
Its just a little bit funny how some readers are telling the author how to write his book better when he is far more succesful than probably anyone reading in Fictionpress.
Guest chapter 101 . 9/2/2019
Holy cow! This has been such an awesome read. I started the series in June and couldn’t put my phone down. I’ve been having Siri read it to me in the car on my way to work and reading it myself before bed. I’m beyond stoked to read the next chapter, as I’m sure many other fans are! Keep up the awesome work!
Guest chapter 101 . 9/2/2019
When is 102 coming out?
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2019
Keybounce

Arc 1 ends at chapter 26
Arc 2 ends at chapter 54
Arc 3 is not complete.
keybounce chapter 1 . 8/31/2019
Request for information: Where are good "break points", if I were to do a sub-book division of this for reading in more manageable, book-sized sections? (It's about 5-8 books in size right now.)
TheBayesian chapter 100 . 8/25/2019
Oh no! I thought there was an update today, it must've been reported/updated. I came here late, as I started reading Mother of Learning a week before chapter 101 came out. I love it of course, and I can't wait to see how it'll play out!
Riniko22 chapter 101 . 8/25/2019
Thank you for the new chapter, it is both leaving me dreading and looking forward to the ending chapter due to knowing the story is so closing to its conclusion.
GreatWyrmGold chapter 2 . 8/24/2019
Hate to repeat myself, but you're establishing lore (starting at the most fundamental, which is pretty generic) while the audience still doesn't know what's happening to Zorian or why we should care about him. What drives him, aside from a dislike of people in general and his family in specific? What stands in the way of achieving his goals? Why does he do what he does and like what he likes? Why should the audience care about this fictional guy when his clearest character trait is "dislikes formality"?

And why are you spending so much time on individual lectures which barely go deep enough into the lore to reveal the general power level of this world's mages? Either your lore is too vague and generic to need explanation, or you don't recognize which parts are interesting, and both are problems.
Are you just trying to establish a "normal world" to break? That's cool and all, but it can and should be done while establishing the protagonist's goals, motivation, and depth, as well as introducing important secondary characters and establishing what makes them important to the story and interesting, foreshadowing the main conflict, etc. And if you can't start in medias res, maybe add a prologue hinting at what is coming.
GreatWyrmGold chapter 1 . 8/24/2019
Not a strong start. The protagonist's motivations are underdeveloped, the worldbuilding is little more than a scattering of tropes and proper nouns, the central conflict is absent, and the focus on all of these things are on what makes the story generic rather than what makes it interesting.
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