This epilogue is kinda dogshit, did you botch it or something?
The parents trope is completly abandoned,
Zach does not show up, did he not defy heavens to save him?
What about fortov
What about Damien wife and his parents? Are they happy now that they have a portal?
Very unsatisfying end tbh, you should rework that epilogue for your book publishing or just exclude the epilogue altogether

Honestly cried a bit when Novelty popped up.

Glad what Zorian spent so much time to get into lived up to the hype, and I'm liking the cast so far.

Well, lets see if the relationship with Xvim gets as hostile as Harry's relationship with Snape lol.

Hey Nobody, this story seems rather well liked so seeing what all the fuss is about.

Glad Zorian can avoid getting into a way to early arranged marriage.

I do like Cyoria, seems like a cool city, for most at least.

Well aside from getting wet things mostly seem like they are starting well, lets see how things progress.

Zorian introduction in the story and the worldbuilding was nicely done. The boy is an interesting main protagonist who has issues with his family and his personality has some similarity with mine when I was younger.
I wonder who his older brother Damian is and what his relationship with him might be. It isn't explained, but it can either be neutral or poor.

Actualmente lo estoy releyendo, es tan bueno como la primera vez que lo leí.

Well here I am again. This is the 3rd time I've read this story, melancholic as always that the story is over. I've read well over 20,000 books in my life and uncountable unfinished works on fanfiction and spacebattles. Thank you for finishing what you started and giving us such a good story.

This has given me a once in a lifetime experience, thank you for your dedication! :D
Please take a lovely day because you've made mine better.

This, this has given me an experience that made me fall into the story itself, almost like an observer right there with the characters, I actually PANICKED when Zorian got soul sight I was thinking 'ah, well I guess he'll find me soon, shit' then remembered I was reading! :D
Honestly I think this has to be the best work of fiction I've read, and I loved every second of this story.
So thank you for this probably once in a lifetime experience, and you should have a lovely day as well.

Chapter 78 does not show cover art for some reason

This chapter has so much foreshadowing that's invisible for a first-time reader but blaring obvious on a reread. It's so good.

Rereading the early chapters, where I know exactly what's going on but Zorian doesn't have a clue, is always so...satisfying.

Zorian has the emotional capacity of a 10 year old

Best story ever. Once i have a job i will pay for the real book, because the author deserves it

This is the first story I am reading in fiction press and it was awesome.