The latest chapter seems a bit low on quality compared to your other chapters. And way more spelling errors then your other chapters too.

Nice one!

It's a really long time since I read the beginning, but I'm pretty sure this fire guy never actually showed up since Zorian has started looping. Has he not realized it or just not make notice of it.

Great story very interesting an it was packed full with action. Way to go!

Good chapter, much excitement, quite a nice build up. Huzza. This is really a wonderful story.

I'm getting really excited. The climax is getting ever closer and the tension's really ratcheting up.

This story is a diamond in a coal mine. I was about to skip this because of the length but I'm glad I didn't.

I love this story. Personally I think you could have done a better job on this major battle by switching perspectives and using cliffhangers.

You didn't do a bad job, it's just not amazing either.

I hope that comment isn't too rude.

Really enjoy your universe and characters :)

Several weeks early does that mean that a month is that long in this world or a mistake or a part of the plot

Holy hell this is good. Your villians are villianous without being idiots, and your heros are handling power creep in a way that is still enthralling. Bravo.

nice, although I expect both the people in the city as well as the rest of eldemar to be shitting bricks about the battles that just popped up outta nowhwere with little to no warning. There's gotta be be a lot of scrambling to get the military moving

Nice, man! It's great how things are all coming together finally.

How many chapters would you say there are left?

some of [the-] Alanic's human volunteers

but they [were] ultimately just a mindless mob

unintimidated by their attempt at setting up [a] blockade