Reviews for Mother of Learning
Zoanzon chapter 100 . 7/12/2019
The beginning of the end...
Zoanzon chapter 97 . 7/12/2019
Honestly, I just love the multitudes you've woven into your villains.

For the lower-level, we have the Ulquaan Ibasan invaders seeking to weaken the continent while the Dragon Cult members see it as an opportunity to get themselves a Primordial, and all the multitudes of other motivations we have in the cult, and how Sudomir plans to use the chaos for his own aims.

And on the higher level, we have Jornak as a Visionary Zealot, Q-I as a (semi-)pragmatic figure doing what he can for his country, and Silverlake as a self-centered, more-unstable-than-originally-expected figure only out for her own skin, all technically co-operating but only barely.

You've woven so many different motivations and personalities together, each a proper antagonist in their own right, yet made all of them realistic and multi-faceted, and I love it.
Zoanzon chapter 94 . 7/12/2019
That's an unexpected twist.
Zoanzon chapter 91 . 7/12/2019
Holy shit
Zoanzon chapter 89 . 7/12/2019
"Curse your sudden but inevitable betrayal!"

I knew the tensions with Silverlake were always going to boil over, but this - and Panaxth's intrustion - were definitely unexpected.
Zoanzon chapter 86 . 7/12/2019
Whoops, there goes the neighborhood.
Zoanzon chapter 85 . 7/11/2019
Welp, 'Critical Mass' definitely fits, cause things just got very interesting.
Zoanzon chapter 83 . 7/11/2019
Well then, that should have repercussions.

And it seems to me like Q-I recognized what he saw regarding thr loop...past experience?
Zoanzon chapter 81 . 7/11/2019
Oh damn, this was fun.

And funny enough, my first read of MoL years ago helped shape the characterization of an ancient lich in one of my settings, and Q-I's depiction here mirrors my character so well. I love Q-I and hope we see more of him.

(Also, when Zorian noted the doubled-reserves my immediate first thought was that Q-I was Zack's ancestor, lol)
Zoanzon chapter 80 . 7/11/2019
Oh wow, things just got fun.
Zoanzon chapter 77 . 7/11/2019
Welp, that's a fun twist.
Zoanzon chapter 76 . 7/11/2019
Ah, Zorian's family is such a shitshow.

Also, lol at trolling Silverlake, and her mentioning Primordials should be fun...
Zoanzon chapter 71 . 7/11/2019
Holy crap

(One of) my ship(s) is finally sailing!
Zoanzon chapter 66 . 7/11/2019
Lol, finally meeting Daimen. It'll be interesting to see how that one goes.
Guest chapter 100 . 7/11/2019
Well and truly loved the ritual and the reactions of Hashlush and Rea.
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