Reviews for Mother of Learning
TheLittleKing chapter 107 . 2/9/2021
Ok, nevermind. I skipped to this chapter and realised that it's completely! I always get post series depression and I have a feeling that finishing this story will cause some of the worst I've ever had. That's a compliment!
TheLittleKing chapter 75 . 2/9/2021
I think this might be the first time reviewing this? After the third or fourth time trying to read this fic I forced myself to read the first chapters until the time loop happens and I'm so happy I did. This story has constantly been by my side for at least a year now. Whenever I feel bored/don't have anything to do I start reading this fic. The world building is incredible and if I didn't know I was reading this on Fictionpress I'd think this would be a book! Absolutely incredible work. I'm a bit apprehensive of continuing (I will of course) since the last update is more than a year ago now I think. If I remember correctly this fic isn't finished? It'd be a shame to read the last chapter and find out it's abandoned but I'll do so anyway. Thanks for writing this story!
Guest chapter 108 . 1/30/2021
10/10 would loop again.
reader01 chapter 20 . 1/23/2021
Now I reread this, I mean the matriarch has some reason to doubt Zorian about the 6 months, but Zorian was also in the presence of Zach and had to hide his presence in case of a third time traveler keying into his existence. So technically unjustified but still.
Guest chapter 108 . 1/8/2021
I’ll be honest, few stories keep as interested and entertained as this did. It was amazing, oh it certainly had rough spots and a few pacing issues, but what story doesn’t? Other then does minor issues, you made something wonderful, you managed to pack an entire magic system, worldbuilding and exposition galore into a readable and interesting format. And making exposition entertaining is something hard to do. I don’t think I’ve ever been this interested in a legion of side characters, and I think this is definitely good. Also, I didn’t expect that twist at the end with the city marble illusions things. No seriously that was unexpected, came out of left field, and was absolutely amazing.
jstf chapter 108 . 1/7/2021
This story slaps as much as everyone claims. Awesome, terrific work. These characters and the trappings of this setting are gonna live rent-free in my head for a loooong time.
jstf chapter 107 . 1/7/2021
Is it wrong that the Gray Hunter is my favorite character? Never mind, don't answer that.
Cuthalion97 chapter 8 . 1/6/2021
The detail and amount of thought put into the spells is particularly intriguing! :)
Cuthalion97 chapter 7 . 1/6/2021
Right - forgot to mention - I'm re-reading right now. :)
Cuthalion97 chapter 7 . 1/6/2021
I read this story once, back in - May, I believe? I may have left a review on it, but I don't remember doing so, and besides - one review, after binge-reading my way through well over 800,000 words of an extremely incredible story, is hardly a fair trade.

I might add that I read the entire story in a week, and it is the best fantasy I've read in a long time. I do, of course, have a few 'complaints' to make, chiefly the lack of Zorian and Zach interaction, since I really love both those characters. If I remember correctly, there's quite a long segment in the middle of the story where Zach doesn't show up at all.

But the pros of this story far outweigh the cons. ;D I particularly love the level of attention that was given to the worldbuilding.
jstf chapter 81 . 1/2/2021
Is it wrong that I'm imagining Quatach-Ichl as disgustingly debonair and staggeringly sexy? Never mind, don't answer that.
jstf chapter 80 . 1/2/2021
Guest chapter 79 . 12/30/2020
Nice Star Trek reference :D

Ack! Losing Alanic sucks, and his warning holds some pretty fearsome tidings, but the idea that he would oppose the theft of a plainly necessary Key seems... wrong.
I'm guessing that it was more of an excuse to get away from Silverlake?
Guest chapter 78 . 12/30/2020
You don't mention if they continue to use the black rooms?
Guest chapter 77 . 12/30/2020
What was that comment about having the skill to pilot an airship being worthless? lol
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