Great story

Heh, busted. That 'boycott the dance' plane fell flat with the quickness. Zorian still kinda gets on my nerves a little. EVERYTHING is negative with this guy. But at the same time I can empathize with his situation some. Family drama... eugh.

This story is just very... enjoyably written? The prose goes down smooth. But seriously, time loop when? Just kidding, I can wait for it.

Reading this for the first time after hearing all the hype. Enjoying it so far. Zorian is kind of a little turd? Like, just a little? I'm digging the worldbuilding. Given the premise of the story I'm guessing the last line of this chapter is a sentiment 'Roach' is going to be expressing a LOT.

I started reading MoL about five, or was it six, years ago. I was still in Highschool at the time and now here I am, about to graduate College and go out into the “Real World”...

Thanks, truly, from the bottom of my heart. MoL reignited a passion for fantasy that I hadn’t realized had died and coming back and rereading the story once a year after a few chapters had dropped made me fall in love all over again.

I don’t know if you’ve already given thought towards publishing MoL, whether it would be through a traditional publisher or if you’d self-publish on Amazon or something, but just now I’m dying to have your book on my shelf.

Best,
David

You shot me!" the Red Robe's voice yelled hysterically behind him. "What kind of mage uses a gun!?"

I don’t know why but I just find this utterly hilarious! I absolutely love this story and I’ve reread at least ten times! It’s one of my favorites! I would love to have a physical copy! Have you thought about publishing? There are websites and companies that also professionally bind books too.

Splendid. Thank you for writing.

Okay... Um... Solid ending bro

Great twist and reveal.

And thank you for writting it, i have devoured this book far faster than i should've, it was the best piece of fantasy i had the pleasure of reading in a very long time !

This is great.

The first mistake I found: “But I am learning thing here, so it's okay. This isn't a zero sum game.”

Absolutely captivating story!

Very interesting.

Really very enjoyable.

This is wonderfully wonderful.

*Looonnnnggg Sloooowwwww Bliinnnnnkk*
'Well, fuck' indeed!