|Reviews for Out On The Ledge|
| peach060 chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
AMAZING! I like the topic, it makes you wonder and want to read on. I escpecially love the last line! I LOVE IT!
| Unfounded chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
I don't usually like rhyming poems, but once again I'm proven wrong.
It's pretty thought provoking. Makes me wonder, and pause. I like it. Great job.
Not criticism, but the "palms" line seemed random to me. Was there an intended meaning? Or was it just put there?