Reviews for Listen To The Thunder
CorkyBookworm1 chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
Wow, you know I've only come across a select few people that can sum up a good thunderstorm the way you just did...I am virtually powerless agains a nice thunderstorm outside my window. The imagery in this short poem was impecible. Wow, that was very nice.
PhoebieB chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
A...MA...ZING! Love it yet again. Please publish you're work! Xxx
Meadow Frost chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
All your other reviewers captured this beautifully, but I'll add my own praise to the mix:

Wonderfully done, it's almost as if you're there, drowning in the rain, hearing the thunder crack in the sky.

simply Beautiful.
J112011 chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
Very sweet and moving. I wonder about the "eyes flood" bit. Why? Is it the little girl's eyes, or the narrator's?
Eleantris chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
Wow, I think this is my favourite out of the poems of yours I've read so far. It's written really simply, but is so effective, and it really touches me because, metaphorically, I can really relate to this.

X :D
Let's See If It Moves chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
This is so simple... and yet so moving. Thank you for adding another classic to the fictionpress archinves.


Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
Now reviewing does work...? I have no clue what went wrong... knowing myself, I probably forgot to submit the review. So sorry for that!

Anyways, beautiful poem :-) A few punctuation issues but that's okay. I can so imagine this situation! Sweet; I like this one :-)
Insanity Streak chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
This is a sweet poem. It flows nicely and you capture the innocence of the little girl perfectly. The only thing I want to comment on is the layout; I personally would of preferred this to be split into stanzas, but it wouldn't make much of a difference anyway - I just thought I'd let you know. All in all, you did a wonderful job with this. Keep writing. :-)
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
This was such a beautiful poem and I hope that it weren't her eyes that flooded...beautiful i'm stunned :)
BuddingPoet chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
what an awesome poem! it really fits now because it won't stop raining! XP
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
Love it and if would oh rain here I'd be delighted

Love your imagery it's pooring rain in my mind :D