|Reviews for Spiraling Fires|
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/20/2013
That's not something I should've read
| Supergirl413 chapter 9 . 10/28/2011
I would love to put music to this some day, or perhaps collaborate on an additional verse...it's lovely. I especially like the second verse.
I would love to hear some of your thoughts on these chapters-your experience writing them, perhaps. If you ever have time/if you ever want to write me about them, that is.
Thank you for writing these :) They made my day.
| Supergirl413 chapter 8 . 10/28/2011
I would call this one satellite, if it were my piece.
the enigmas unsolved
what my heart revolves...'
(beautiful and subtle rhyme, by the way...)
makes me think...
why my heart revolves
like a satellite
as your love
hiding under the covers tonight
your dreams flood my soul.
I can't get enough of your poetry...please post more soon!
| Supergirl413 chapter 5 . 10/28/2011
Wow...this piece really touched me. I was literally crying by the 4th stanza. Beautifully written-it perfectly describes what I've been feeling for years. Thank you.