Reviews for Spiraling Fires
Guest chapter 5 . 1/20/2013
That's not something I should've read
Supergirl413 chapter 9 . 10/28/2011
I would love to put music to this some day, or perhaps collaborate on an additional verse...it's lovely. I especially like the second verse.

I would love to hear some of your thoughts on these chapters-your experience writing them, perhaps. If you ever have time/if you ever want to write me about them, that is.

Thank you for writing these :) They made my day.
Supergirl413 chapter 8 . 10/28/2011
I would call this one satellite, if it were my piece.

'Shivering at

the enigmas unsolved

wondering at

what my heart revolves...'

(beautiful and subtle rhyme, by the way...)

makes me think...

wondering at

why my heart revolves

like a satellite

for you

as your love

for her

evolves

hiding under the covers tonight

your dreams flood my soul.

I can't get enough of your poetry...please post more soon!
Supergirl413 chapter 5 . 10/28/2011
Wow...this piece really touched me. I was literally crying by the 4th stanza. Beautifully written-it perfectly describes what I've been feeling for years. Thank you.