Kudos!

Its like watching a gay romcom, its very well written! Thanks for sharing this to us, i'll remember this story for sure, maybe read it after a few years or soo. Cheers

Amazing story!
You're very talented!
The only flaw is that is too short!
I hope you write more about Viv and Toby someday, a glipse of their future maybe~

Nooo! It ended! It was such a delightful read! Maybe Viv was along the line of saying that he wasn't sure but then change his mind because of the kiss?

I DEMAND AN UPDATE!

Please...

This was super cute! You're an excellent writer :)

Viva said yes.

Okay, ending it like that is just mean *pouts* Personally, I think they are really cute together :)

I hope he says that they are going to stay at his house order pizza and screw :( please tell me that happen.I want them to be English tha Viv use was fantastic.

I love the witty dialogue and characters. Your long oneshots are great!

Sooooo hooooot . and very funny yur very talented $.$

i love this book (or fic, what are we supposed to call them?) up until the ending. I had the nasty, horrible feeling that poor Toby is going to be rejected. You should write a sequel (I prefer multi-chaptered and with some angst, but not much) because you so have a nice start for a story.

well, I think the only thing I'm gonna criticize about beside the fact that I despise your ending (WHY IN THE WORLD WOULD YOU DO THAT) is your um-kind-of-sort-of poor summary (and title,perhaps).
I mean, if it wasn't because of me accidentally noting that you got 26 reviews there, which means above average (well damn I think this fic is beyond that category) for a oneshot-type-of-story, I'd have easily looked over this and gone to read something else.
But I must say that I feel terribly guilty for underestimating this at first! I loved it so much! I don't know how you do that, but you got this thing that makes even a minor character appear so interesting (hey I liked Chris ok).
I have no right to complain about the ending though, but I think from the way Toby told it from his pov, Viv said ...something along the lines of no? idk, it's just that the answer kinda leaned to it. I just hope Viv made a witty response that means YES OK WE CAN FUCK in the end instead of refusing Toby BUT GOD IF I AM RIGHT THEN I'LL BE SO SAD THAT I'LL HATE YOU.
anyway, have i said that i love this? :)

aww damn u cant leave us on suspense! :D i loved both characters - awesome!

I think he refused...poor toby...