Reviews for The Sun Will Rise
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
This isn't my favorite piece of yours. I just felt like the descriptions were all kinda cliched. I liked the format though. I thought the repetition with "the" and the noun doing something to you worked well to tie the piece together.

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Subbie chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
I hope so for me too!

Going into surgery in about an hour...
Astraea Athena chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
I like this optimistic making the best out of a situation poem, great job!