Hahahahaha. I like that her envelope had a sad face on it.

I loved this version too! Personally, I think both this and TMIYOH are both well written. I enjoyed reading both for what they were, even though they were different.

Cheers,
TQL

What if you combine those two? I like the tmiyoh but there's no explanation from julian. on tmiyoh there's no explanation that julian try to find mischa, but mischa has already changed her number and move to another apartment.

Loved it! I like both of them equally, cause this was straightforward that I liked, and the first one cause you put other characters into it

Well, this one was more to-the-point than the previous version. Quite honestly, though, I liked the other one more :)

They're fairly different - so I would say they're 2 stories all by themselves :D

I actually liked the other better because julian kinda talked more about his feelings... Plus he went a bit more caveman in the other one and i'm a sucker for that. Haha

But interesting twist. Definitely good job nonetheless!

Build up your background of the characters. It didn't feel realistic. I'm fairly sure I read this before and the original was better.