Reviews for a broadway movie scene
xmovedx chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
i simply adore this. you do wonderfully with description. i love the line "peeling away at all the impure." also, this style is lovely - the way it just runs on.

overall, beautiful piece(:
iliads chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
there is nothing about this that is not stunning. everything - from your descriptions to the emotions - is beautifully done. great work.
Excessum-Dreamer chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Hmmh. Capital letters and proper punctuation! *cough*

Otherwise, enthralling and down to earth poetry. Give me more!
flowers in december chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
I didn't realize at first that "mascara mixed with saltwater" was someone crying. So it sounded a little off until I put it together.

This sounds like a scene that should be private and not allowed on a screen, but hell, I'd watch it.