Reviews for Our Book
HalfPast12 chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
This piece is so very beautifully written. Each word seems to have been chosen with so much care, because the emotion really seeps through each word.

I especially loved the line, "The skies had cried for nothing"

Truly very beautiful. x
B.H.Marinich chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Don't really have much to say other than I really liked this :) very well done.
Portrous chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
This was a really nice poem, as I can relate to the feeling you're conveying.

The poem is really relaxing. It's neither too deep, nor is it too shallow. Really balanced out.

Plus, I really like the ending! :)