Sorry accidental postage there. But yes as I was saying, girls shouldn't go into depression for something like that, it makes us seem inferior and I find it kinda offending. Now I know this sounds like a flame but I am not flaming you, just how you percieve women in this story. (Sorry I am a feminist) I really hope you don't hate me for this because who knows you can be a great person. And for the bad language I swear I only use when I am angry. Have a good day.

GAHHHHHH! WHAT THE FUCK!? You do not listen to a dude who just fucking broke up with you. Do you know know how mad this story in general makes me? It's not your writing, which is pretty good by the way, and it's not even the plot really. Ok I don't know how to say this. It's basically little things in the whole fic that make me unable to read this any longer (seriously some of these had me screaming and sobbing into my pillow from frustration) :
1. When your parents arrange a marriage fo you, you fight. Especially if it is to the guy that cheated on you.
2. And if your "family" and "friends" really are those things then they wouldn't be voting on your future. And you wouldn't be accepting their supposed forgiveness.
3. Why can't you just make her happy and strong for once? It does not take 4 years to get over one guy. That is just plain stupid. Like she isn't Bella Swan for God's sake, she should be stronger than that.
4. Joe's excuse on cheating and breaking up with her is just just...UGH! It's maddening! Because if you really loved her like you said than guess what, you would find a way to make it work.

I'm sorry I sound like a complete bitch, but I hate when people like you who think that good story involves a girl falling into depression (tat's ano

Update soon

I liked it!

I love this story! UPDATE!

Update please?

This chapter didn't seem as natural as some of the others (it was different), but I liked it. I like how you included a dream in the chapter. I really hope that you are able to update soon!

OMG if you don't update soon I think I might die just checking everyday! I. Love. This. Story! :D

Aww I was hopeing it would have updated by now ! Up date sooon!

Well, David is surely becoming much gayer in this chapter.

I don't get why you're still attempting to pair Holly off with Joe though. The prospect of their romance ever ends in a happy way is just very unreal.

how odd, if those girls have known Olivia longer than Holly it means they were perfectly acquainted with her brother before he became famous... and if they are friends of Olivia most of them must be around 23-24 years old... why would they be gushing and acting like teenage fangirls over a guy they knew since he was a teen, before being famous and who is younger than them?

That development confused me.

This is an interesting story line; very unique! I can't wait to hear about David's plan ;)

I still don't like Joe.

I don't get way everyone is pushing for her to be with Joe. If it was my family or any other sane family, they would have chased him away. Let him marry what's her face. He had a nice girl and he blew it (or I hope he did but you're the author). Ugh and David? He's no better. Where's the nice guys? Surely, there has to be a good one out there for her.

I'm usually not a fan of "taking back the cheater" stories. Can you tell?:P But I really like your story. And I just need to know what's going to happen.

Great update though and I'm looking forward to the next one.

Aww I was hopeing it was joe :(

wait I'm confused.

Was the marriage contract thing for Joe & Holly

over? haven't read this story for ages

and now i'm confused.

you did the wrong thing though.

I love David and he's better than Joe

but you made him a god damn cheater like Joe.

redo joke joke.