Reviews for Just Breathe
Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
Vivid images, superb job once more!

"Smash the hourglass that held memories of time gone past. - Push the innocence, which wrapped me so tightly, away. - Step off the bridge and free-fall into the emptiness" Love those lines, so relatable.

"Walk outside and leave the rest of me behind." Such a beautiful image for a new beginning. "I just gotta take it one step at a time." So very, very relatable. Gorgeous poem, love it 3
Eden Green chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
I could really see this in my mind. I envisioned feeling trapped but by no other fault than my own fears, and feeling like I know that the path to being free and feeling it is at the tips of my fingers and'I just gotta take it one step at a time.' Very nice.
Tender Lumplings chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
I love how your poems are both relatable and tell a story. They flow very smoothly, too. Awesome work. :)
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
This is amazing!

I do feel like I'm suffocating (:

Love it everything about it

Perfect poem brings me such vivid images

The way you manipulate it is fantastic

Amazing
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
Superb as always. I love the mention of the bubble popping and the idea of being unable to breathe. Brilliant, really amazing. :-D