Reviews for collarbone ghost
anachronistic chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
i avoid reviewing pieces with a lot of reviews because usually they've said what i'm going to say already but this was haunting and full of gorgeous imagery and really great, wow
paper parasols chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
gorgeous. it breaks my heart.
fisheye lens chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
gorgeous. truly haunting. this is entirely way too brilliant.
classic violet chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
Beautiful, beautiful. Absolutely staggeringly gorgeous. This is brilliant. I love the diction, I love everything about this poem.
uponamarigold chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
Holy nuggets! I didn't understand this AT ALL, but I loved it. Verses were absolutely stunning.
xmovedx chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
ohmygod. i love this. i can't even tell you how muchi love this.
Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
Wow - I really like this one! Kind of a breathless feeling, but still stunning :)

"but that does not mean we are any, ... any... less beautiful." Love those lines 3
between stars chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
and you write like a genius.

I've been meaning to review this for ages, so sorry. but holy, twinny, could you write even more perfectly!

I loved this whole poem. It was haunting, and you made me shiver all over. The first line, twinny, left me breathless.

you are nothing but a dream-stealer and a nightmare hoarder, and still your bones are etched with my mark.

Take a minute to revel in the genius that is this line. I love it to death, and I cannot begin to believe you when you tell me your age, The whole poem feels sort of a fog-feel, I don't know any other way to describe it! :)

I think the line I liked best was this one - never, never a period, because you are not


You write wonderfully. Don't ever stop!

I will love this poem as one of my favourites forever and ever. Please let me know when you publish, kay?

love you.

LivesTooShort52 chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
Haunting. Gothic. Stunning. Shall I go on? Wonderful! At first I was literally thinking, "What the fu- oh! This is goooddd."

Please check out some of my poetry or one-shots?
weareyourworstnightmare chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
i liked the yo - yo effect it really got my attention and made my mind work