Reviews for Monster
yWrite chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Chilling is definitely the word for this story. Funny how easy it is to overlook the obvious choices.
Princess Destiny1 chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Wow, that was a really chilling story and I loved reading it. I thought that the monster was under the bed, but when the sister checked the room, she did look there. You might want to take out that discrepancy. :) I'm surprised that you don't have more reviews...
angie hofer chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Ada was trying to keep the piece long enough for them to eat. You should change that part. But whoa! That is a story!
FlyingCatFish chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
bone-chilling would be a good word to describe that.. i'm impressed..