I was cracking up the whole chapter! I love reading this story because it always brings a smile to my face! (:

This is extremely well-written. I had a lot of fun reading it! I love it when you find legitimately good stories while browsing :)

Have I mentioned that I love this? I must have.

I like funny stories like Money Shot; they make me smile.

I bet she pulles back and says got it. Because that would be halarious.

Lol 'baby maker' that made me laugh and why did you end there? Evil cliffies, I hate them! lol update soon :)

Love it! Adding in Carly was a good touch, hehehehe.

JM

I love your writing style. Your transitions between scenes are really smooth. This is such a joy to read! Keep up the good work. :)

I love this story! Please continue!

The characters are funny, the writing is witty, and the plot is not cliche.

I'm sorry... I've been reading but not reviewing because I'm fucking lazy! Yay! And oh my God. This is actually almost exactly what happened to me once... *suspicius look* But I LOVE the characters and I think that you shouldn't keep writing! I am addicted to this story? And like any drug addict out there, I will do anything to get what I need! *eye twitches* That includes kidnapping and murder. So keep writing, bitch! haha... Please, don't take me seriously when I say that.

Okay, I know Danny the army-brat is probably just a one time character that delivered one line, but I'm already in love with the kid! That's how good this story is!

Thanks for posting,

Rand another.

Hey, first off, congrats on the great story. The storyline is rather cliche to me, but I don't mind it when the story is done well (which this story is). This is well done, good job.

Two notes: one is that I actually kind of wish that Oakley ends up with Austin. But then again, I always seem to want the girl to end up with the side/second love interest.

The second is that this story weirds me out a little. This is because my name is Kara and it isn't commonly used as a name in stories so it kind of creeps me out a little that it's used (yeah it's spelt differently but it's pernounced the same).

Hope you update soon, keep writing.

I wonder what Missy will say if she ever found out about this...

Adorable!

JM

lovin' the story, keep em comin'!

hey firstly i just wanna say that i love your profile page (especially the vagina bit! and no i am not gay!) secondly i love your story :) Drew seems like a really nice guy behind all that bravado and i think him and Oakley suit each other in a sort of unusual way :) anyway please continue writing and updating whenever you can Thank you