Reviews for Money Shot
veronica leigh chapter 6 . 12/16/2011
haha! Okay, this chapter was awesome.

"I've seen bigger."

Made me laugh so hard xDD

Loves as always!

-Veronica Leigh
StillChristine chapter 6 . 12/11/2011
i love the way your story is paced. the story is just FANTASTIC! im in love with it and i cant wait until the next chapter. i love the way Oakley is so comfortable around drew. it makes the story flows much better. overall this is amazing :)
lovelymrcato chapter 6 . 12/10/2011
Loved it and I'm kind of curious as to Oakley's explanation to that last question. Anyways, Austin seems like a cool dude and when I read he had Platinum blonde hair my immediate thoughts were Draco Malfoy. Yeah, I'm obsessed with Harry Potter. Sue me. ;) Can't wait for tomorrow!
ohmygodhello chapter 6 . 12/10/2011
So, basically, I already fucking adore this even though there's only six chapters and it's only just beginning so you really must update and I'm extremely jealous of how good you are at writing and so, yes, update before my head explodes or something of that idea. Toodaloo x
LivesTooShort52 chapter 6 . 12/10/2011
Be proud. I laughed really hard at this chapter.
rsmith1219 chapter 6 . 12/10/2011
Ah, a new guy to spice things up! Good chapter :). I love the teasing and stuff that goes between Oakley and drew. They're quite entertaining :). Look forward to another update!
streebee2 chapter 6 . 12/10/2011
This is awesome. Please continue!
Xxluvbugger213xX chapter 5 . 12/10/2011
Hm. Did you know you could only review once per chapter... I meant to say in my last review that I'm really liking it so far and I'm assuming is going to be a bit of competition..?

Plus, looks like Drew dear is losing his hard edges over a pair of Oakleys.

PS. Don't think too hard about what I say... I speak in strange tongues. I:
Xxluvbugger213xX chapter 6 . 12/10/2011
Man. i'm sorry you're being dicked by your school. I've got finals next week, trust me I understand. There's nothing that sucks more than being dicked.

Hehheh. I'm full of 'em.
72898 chapter 6 . 12/10/2011
I noticed a typo, and just wanted to point it out to you. The sentence was:

Austin shrugged. "My mom wanted a change of scenery and apparently, Wakefield is one of the 'Best Places to Rise Kids'' according to Business Weekly."

Not trying to be annoying, just helpful!
AwesomeBlonde89 chapter 5 . 11/27/2011
I was dying of laughter during this entire chapter! Please update soon xD
Garneau chapter 5 . 11/27/2011

Loving the story. The protagonist is pretty hilarious and a real solid feature of your writing. I love her!

Thanks heaps for the Celius temperature. I have no idea when it comes to Fahrenheit, ha.

I really like Oakley's ongoing sporadic thoughts, I mean come on, Vienna Sausage? Gold.

Until your next update, keep up the good work,

rsmith1219 chapter 5 . 11/26/2011
Well that should be interesting! I hope you update soon cuz I really like this. Cool characters and shit :).
rsmith1219 chapter 4 . 11/26/2011
rsmith1219 chapter 3 . 11/26/2011
Liked his POV. Another good one :). I really like this story
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