Reviews for Skin to Skin
sam1995 chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
A fairly abstract poem. Interesting.
Inkspilled chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
I liked this, especially the rhythm. It flowed so nicely. I don't know what to say about the italics, spacing and bold. It didn't distract me from it, but the spacing on 'scar' at the end did confuse me as I was reading. The fonts actually match the words, I do feel as if the words themselves are strong enough to portray what you want to get across, though. Overall, I quite liked it. :)
Erysimum chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
I like the story in this poem. Intriguing, but doesn't give too much away- it really made me think, which I love in a poem, and especially one so short! I'm not so sure about your use of italics and letter spacings (ie. 'b-e-f-o-r-e'). The way you used that seemed a bit random to me, and I feel like it detracted from the overall impact of the poem- because the words and story in themselves are very good!