Reviews for Lover's demise
LivesTooShort52 chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
Wonderful. One of they best I've read recently. The way you used the same two lines to open and end the poem is something that I could never do.

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1anonymous1 chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
I really like this especially the repetition which makes the poem stick in the mind, great job!