Reviews for Feathers in the Dust |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "So what did you do last Sunday?" "Oh, you know, the usual; got killed, had to possess my body, strip it, give it a bath, all that good stuff. Hey, that technique you told me about cleaning brains off of sweatshirts really helped. Thanks a bunch." "Oh, no problem. You just have to use the right stuff. See, Tide is good when it comes to digestive acid but not brain matter..." That's the impression I get from your story xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again, great chapter. I'm loving the writing style, it's just very professional. (which is something you don't find on FP much these days.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting setting and plot. I do want to see what happens in Chapter 3 :) Love the writing style. Please update soon! Although I actually thought that the protagonist was actually male in the first chapter until names were mentioned hahaha. she's spunky ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is a very amusing story you have going there. Keep it up! Please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very interesting story, certainly an intriguing concept. I can't wait to see more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I figured if I couldn't catch up on 12S, the least I could do was read this. Very interesting concept, a great set up, too. I'm interested to see how this plays out. As always, magnificently written, I found no errors. (Your writing puts mine to shame XD.) |