|Reviews for Swallowed|
| NONBELIEVER chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
"And if i die before i wake. . ."NB: what? i didn't sign up for that!
| Mizu no Sabaku chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
I almost cried, that was so touching, and how you repeatedly repeated "there was a white bottle..." I'd say this was better than any of your other works. Lovely writing that just touches my heart's core. I felt as if the poor little suicidal (if I got that part...) girl was real, and I really, really hope that
God will take care of her,
as you so touchingly wrote. Congratulations for your masterpiece!
| PlasmaBomb chapter 1 . 5/27/2001
I don't get it, where did the voice come from, what was in the bottle? -