Leave us at a cliffhanger why don't you? Amazing story! It could do with editing but that's something only you know how to do because it needs to be how you want it.

Interesting bit about Finn... Love the story so far :)

This is SUCH a cliff-hang! T_T_T_T

SOOOOOOOOO unfair! *pout*

I love it at the same time I hate it. I would've done the same though, but still it's no fun reading things like this. :P

Anyway, can you write maybe an epilogue or somethin? To see what happened to Rum and Finn and alll. T_T

PUH-LEASE! I'm like suffering right now!

Oh, and I LOVE YOU AND YOUR STORIES SOOOOOOOOO MUCH! :) Just wanted to tell you that! I've been so attached to the story and the characters themselves. Thanks for sharing this story. You're SO amazing! :)) AND SOOOO GREAT! :D

I can't express how much I was so hang up on this and how much I love this story. Not to mention how sad I am that it's finished. I hope I hear more from the characters or something soon though.

This story have brought butterflies in my tummy, goosebumps, laughter, and tears to me. I'm so happy that I got to read this. LOVE YOU SO MUCH and YOUR STORY! :) THANKS SOOOOOOOO MUCH!

LOts of love and hugs and kisses,
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p.s. I do have a fictionpress acount. :)

Oh my god! What a cliffhanger ending! I seriously CANNOT wait for the next book. (:

This was an amazing story, and it was very well written. I enjoyed every second of it, whether I was crying, laughing, or smiling. I don't think you'll have a hard time getting this book published...and if you do (have a hard time, that is), there's something seriously wrong with the literary world. Honestly, I can picture this book series becoming super popular like the Hunger Games trilogy. Dystopian fiction is all the rage right now, of course. And it's my personal favorite genre! (: I can also see this story making a great movie; I was picturing it in my head the entire time I was reading!

Anyways, I'm definitely going to go follow you on Twitter so I can stay updated on your writing! I hope to see this published eventually (I would definitely buy this!) and I hope to see Beware out soon! (:

- Jordan

OH MY GOSH I LOVE THIS STORY! You get it published, I promise I'll buy a copy!

Hey, you should write a sequel! In Finn's point of view! Like, he's grown up and married and he lived to tell his kids about life in Astro City and Caspa and Rum, and Etz, and Jai, and President Azure, and Cal and everybody. I'd buy that, too! I'm always on the lookout for awesome literature!

- Sarah

I'm really enjoying this story so far. The characters are great and well thought-out.

I loved this soooo much! It's probably my favorite story of all time! :D I can't wait to read Beware, please please post it soon!

I just posted the review under the same name but now I'm logged in. I wanted to add that I hope Caspa doesn't get memory swiped again because I want her to remember Rum and everything. Also, I pictured Rum as Jack O'Connell even though I don't think that's how he was described.

Do you plan on posting the sequel soon? I must know!

Noo! You can't leave us on a cliffhanger like that. No fair. Can you write us an epilogue? You don't have to include it in the version you want published. Please?

Oh my GOD! I was like no no no this can't be the end WHAT but there is a sequel right? Omg...I love this story so much I can't even put it into words. I love Rum more than ever now. Maybe the hit on her head was from Lon or some good guy...but i was expecting someone to be patrolling the outside so aggh I don't know!

Cal. Wow. I can't say I wasn't expecting him to be bad, but I was definitely not expecting him to be so insane! And poor Jai accidentally telling them about her dreams...

Before I realized this was the end, I was hoping that on the outside maybe Caspa would find her family (I the rest of them weren't also taken in) and we'd learn her real name. I really hope Rum makes it outside with them. Also, I really loved their parting kisses. I felt bad, but I also think Rum won't be killed because of who he is.

Thank you so much for this story because it was INCREDIBLE. I really hope you'll get the next one up ASAP! I can't wait for more. I really can't.

(oh one thing. You called Finn 'Cal' right after the bomb went off)

Omg is tht really the end? Aaarrgh! Cannot wait for the sequel!

PLEASE POST IT ON HERE! YOU MUST! The ending was awesome for leaving us hanging, but i didnt like it :D. Please, write more! I LOVE IT!

Ahh, that is such a crazy ending! I definitely did not see it coming. Honestly, the last few chapters moved so quickly that the ending seems so abrupt and so much is left unfinished. I'm hoping that maybe you ended it that way on purpose so that you can revise it with a different ending and get the story published. I would read it for sure if you get published! Great story, and keep up the good work with your writing.

I've been with this story from day one and I fell in love with the characters. I saw Rum being Azure's son from the get-go, but I didn't see Cal betraying them... that left me slack-jawed and reeling! I'm so proud of you for completing this and I cannot wait to hear more from you in the future. If you see a new follower named "yoitsamberfool" on twitter, that's me!
Congrats (again) on the completion and I'm sure you won't be away for too long, ;)
Amber

AWESOME TWIST!
not that surprised though about Rum and Azure being related.

ANYWAY, PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN! :)