Reviews for Believe |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I had a feeling Cal was bad news! Poor Rum! I like their (Rum & Caspa's) relationship, but I'd like to see it go farther. I hope they get out of the city! RUM IS THE PRESIDENT'S SON? (Yet somehow, I'm not completely surprised. I knew there was a reason Rum got away with things.) Did Cal kill Rum's mama? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it, it's amazing. I knew Rum was somehow connected to the President, ever since the chapter where the President tells Caspa about how his mother died, but for some reason I never thought he was his son. I love that part! Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.O I knew it! I knew it! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was the best chapter yet! I never liked Cal, so YAY! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cal's a bad guy! And Rum's the presidents son! Oh my god, you really have a thing for cliff hangers! Fantastic chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I always had a feeling Rum was the president's son... but after Caspa's conversation with the president, i gave up that thought. Cal's a traitor.. what a shame, i actually liked him |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your writing style, and how you put so much suspense/action in it! It's great! Way beyond what I could ever do! I honestly hope I can write like you someday! :) :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is awesome! I love it! I CAN NOT wait for the next chapter! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES! They found Finn! I hope they escape! Looking forward to the next chapter! :D :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing! I got my sister into the story too :)... Anyway, you left us hanging! I cant wait for the next chapter! :D :D :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Could see that coming from a mile away! But who is the black lock? Cannot wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was naively hoping that Gellert might be a good guy...I guess not...lol. Hopefully the Black Lock she runs into is the one who brought her in, because he seems a little more likely to be willing to help her out. I'm curious about the "anonymous tip", of course, and I have no idea who it might have been...maybe one of the Overseers because she's been painting pictures of her dreams. Or maybe one of the Black Locks who searched their house and saw them in Rum's chest. I just wish your chapters were a bit longer! This and the last could have been combined as one chapter but that's alright because you do update every day. I just always want more! Also, I still haven't decided if I trust Cal. |
![]() ![]() The suspense is going to kill me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is so exciting, i can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw I liked Lon. By the way, you have really good names in this story. |